More critique musings...
- It is better to favour one media type over the other. Make an awesome model, and use plain drawings as a backdrop. Or produce some amazing drawings and leave the model small/bare/abstract. Producing two mediocre or or two good sets of information is not as effective - there should be a part with depth to focus on.
- Follow a good argumentative structure for the introduction. An example:
- It is better to favour one media type over the other. Make an awesome model, and use plain drawings as a backdrop. Or produce some amazing drawings and leave the model small/bare/abstract. Producing two mediocre or or two good sets of information is not as effective - there should be a part with depth to focus on.
- Follow a good argumentative structure for the introduction. An example:
- Define how you see the brief
- Introduce the problem or opportunity you seek to address
- Introduce your solution and detail the conceptual sources or processes used
- Explain and detail why it is effective in solving the problem/opportunity and how it is a successful resolution of your concepts/process.
- Some form of self-analysis of the overall project. Addressing points that critics may bring up on your own lessens their impact.
- Some sort of overall summary
- Good parries for critiques:
- Reject the link between their assertion and your project, ie "I dont see that being applicable as..."
- Disregard the impact of their assertion on your projects effectiveness
- Establish the assertion/problem as being beyond the scope of the brief
- Establish the assertion/problem as being something to be looked at if further development is needed (which it isnt).
- x or y drawing/concept/detail is further detailed in my sketchbook (rather than in presentation)
- The length of our design phase didn't allow for this detail / others given priority
- Use a random case study, use it as an example where x or y was effective, and how you looked to apply this to your project.
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